Logo- Redesign

Hi All, here is what I have done based on the feedback! Thanks so much for all the thoughts, I always thought something was off with the Hallissey Design in lined and now that I fixed the d swoosh I like it just as much as the bottom one. Coni, is it possible to have 2 logos? Perhaps a secondary one? I am thinking the in-lined one would go great on the back of print items, like invitations that I do and the bottom text would go well with my website? Or should I just force myself to pick one and use that for all?

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  1. Colleen - in this case, the logos are similar enough to use them both I suppose... but the color breaks should be identical between them, not as I see them sit here - with colors reversed. And... now that the swash is absolutely perfect on the "d", return to the "h" and see if you can recreate that thick/thin aspect of the swash... so they will be both match. I really would attempt to copy/paste/rotate/reflect the "d" swash and see if it can be used as is for the "h". And lastly, I can't stop thinking about how successful this logo was as it sat in a dark square. Are you sure you want to drop that outer shape from the logo? Maybe now that the swashes are perfect you don't want to contain the script element... but, it WAS quite a successful, memorable, and bold icon in its square.

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