Delivery Menu Update - Jackie

For those that gave me feedback, here is the FroyoWorld Delivery Menu with some changes. The empty white space is for direct mailing postage space (still needs to be added). I am still struggling with the hierarchy of the cover.


Wolfbait

Hey everyone,
This was my brochure for corp. identity. Wolfbait is a fictional energy drink brand focusing on biodegradable cartons instead of cans, fair trade, and more organic products within each carton.















Personal Logo

Hey everyone,
so this is my personal logo for Cosmonaut Designs. I still need to modify the earth to a more clean version but was looking for feedback on its present version.


Calendar update

Heres an update on the calendar.
I cant decide how I want the cover.
There are 2 cover images, let me know which one works.





below are 2 pages of the calendar I didn't bother to show 
on the last calendar post because they are too plain and I thought they were fine.



For the next 3 pages on the left,
I made more space down the center
to separate the 2 columns and brought down the paragraphs









These are my next projects, it was hard to tell which people liked better in the beginning of class when everyone was choosing the favorites with the sticky notes, each would always get a couple. So I want to know which people like better, if I should keep both in or take one out!

They were all part of a project with my last post of the new orleans trumpet info graph.





Article Spread - Jackie

(Sorry for spamming with posts)

Hey guys! Above is an article spread designed to be in a budget travel magazine. Target market would be 25-35 years of age, both male and female. Thoughts?

Froyo Delivery Menu - Jackie


Client: FroyoWorld Allston (frozen yogurt lounge service froyo and smoothies)
Target: Young adults, mostly college aged and young professionals (18-25).

The objective was to create a tri-fold brochure with the store's delivery menu. The first image (from left to right) has an inside flap, back cover, and front cover. The second image is the inside of the brochure. It is supposed to be a white background, so ignore the light grey color!

It goes to print for 10,000 copies in a week or so, so some feedback would be great!

Jackie

Eurail Ad - Jackie

Hello Everyone,

I need a single advertisement to add to my portfolio. Due to the surplus of travel related pieces I currently have, I thought adding something for Eurail would be appropriate, however, I am stuck.

My target for this piece is young adults, and give some information for those unfamiliar with the brand, Eurail offers cheap packages for young adults traveling through Europe.

I was trying to go for a passport stamp kind of feel with "Roma" but I am not having much luck. Any suggestions overall?

Thanks in advance!
Jackie

NY Cityscape second attempt

Here is my new york cityscape photoshop piece again, after feedback this is what I've come up with but out of all my pieces for some reason this is giving me the most difficult to finalize. Coni, I took your advice on the approach to make it more of an informative tourism poster but I am not happy with it yet and don't want to waste too much time stuck so I thought I would try again for some more feedback!

For those who may not remember, the I love NY used to be in the paint blob so I decided to move into the street sign to incorporate more into the design, which I do like but something about the paint and words is not sitting right with me! I tried to make the blob red instead to tie into the color of the heart but it looks to much like blood to me when I some blending options.



Recipe Project

Hey guys, I was laying out my portfolio and realized I could use an extra piece, so I was wondering what you all thought of this one. Is it worth adding in? Any tips for improvement?



Pretty self explanatory project I think, we had to design a page for a recipe. Mine was beer and cheddar soup. I found a palette of different shades of beer colors and used them along with a cheddar yellow to create the color scheme, and made it look like the page was being filled up by beer by adding the gradient and bubbles in the background. The flowy stripe at the top is supposed to look like foam on top of the beer.