The following posts and comments were made during summer 2014 The New England Institute of Art's Graphic Design Portfolio class and were meant to facilitate the process of work, feedback, rework, and continual feedback to meet the needs of the students. Faculty: Coni Porter

Personal Logo - Jackie

Hello!
Just looking for some feedback for my personal logo (before & after shown above). My biggest struggle has been the top of the curve in the loop of the 'J'

Let me know what you guys think!

Delivery Menu Update - Jackie

For those that gave me feedback, here is the FroyoWorld Delivery Menu with some changes. The empty white space is for direct mailing postage space (still needs to be added). I am still struggling with the hierarchy of the cover.

Wolfbait

Hey everyone,
This was my brochure for corp. identity. Wolfbait is a fictional energy drink brand focusing on biodegradable cartons instead of cans, fair trade, and more organic products within each carton.

Personal Logo

Hey everyone,
so this is my personal logo for Cosmonaut Designs. I still need to modify the earth to a more clean version but was looking for feedback on its present version.

Calendar update

Heres an update on the calendar.

I cant decide how I want the cover.

There are 2 cover images, let me know which one works.

below are 2 pages of the calendar I didn't bother to show 

on the last calendar post because they are too plain and I thought they were fine.

For the next 3 pages on the left,

I made more space down the center

to separate the 2 columns and brought down the paragraphs

These are my next projects, it was hard to tell which people liked better in the beginning of class when everyone was choosing the favorites with the sticky notes, each would always get a couple. So I want to know which people like better, if I should keep both in or take one out!

They were all part of a project with my last post of the new orleans trumpet info graph.

Article Spread - Jackie

(Sorry for spamming with posts)

Hey guys! Above is an article spread designed to be in a budget travel magazine. Target market would be 25-35 years of age, both male and female. Thoughts?