First 25 Rules of the Internet

Hey everyone,
For my next project, I'm going to be touching up on a list poster I did that includes the "first 25 rules of the internet". I'd post a link to the whole list, but some of that is inappropriate and you can google that on your own time ;). Anyways, I've already been messing around with this so I posted both the original and what I've done to it since. I'm still trying to figure out what to do with 24 & 25. The boxes are there because they reference the board where a lot of these rules originate, and look exactly like how a post would look, but I'm still unsure about it.

Original

Rework

self branding

Hi guys

Here is what I got for my branding. I need help choosing a color. Im stuck between either bright red, cobalt blue, or teal . Let me know what you think

Self-Branding: Christopher Choi

Here is my self-branding package. I am aiming for a sports design because after college i would like to go into corporate identity and later get into sports apparel. I would like your opinion on my stationery package and was wondering if it reflect my design style. I do apologize for the lack of information i can't think straight at moment, a slight headache

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Hallissey Design

Here is my personal logo that I am working on refining. I am wondering if the H going off the circle is clear. I wanted it to get the impression of staying within the circle but growing outside of it as well and as needed.

Let me know what you think.

Thanks

Sound of Boston Mobile Website

Sound of Boston is an online music publication at which I'm currently an intern. 
I am designing their mobile site interface to better organize their variety of columns and articles. 

The interface is designed to break up their articles into to categories  "Reading", and "On the Town". Reading features articles such as reviews and news, and "On the Town" Features music store and venue locations, and a calendar of upcoming shows and events. 

Self Branding

Possible logo using my last name "Tarricone" 
Curious as wether the logo reads as such, and if color should be implemented. 

Digital Illustration Poster

This was my final for Digital Illustration. The concept was to create a design based on the quote chosen. My response to the quote was to create a "mother nature" like being. I did this because for one, people like seeing images of other people. It evokes emotion that we can easily relate to due to expressions. Also, mother nature is believed to be the all powerful being in nature so my reasoning was that if you acted as if you could make a difference than you will.

I've changed a few rough lines and technical details in my design but feel that I am still struggling to be expressive with the type. So, I am asking for your feedback. Is the type successful as it is or should I modify it in any way? 

Hay I reworked my business again ... I fell like I have made some headway and I have hit a snag.

Possible Logo

Hello class,

This is a rough of my logo, I took a few script typefaces that I thought resembled the look I was going for in my sketch and I believe this one is actually close. I am still erasing and breaking apart so I think I am making progress. I know this alone can't be read as an "L" and "P" so my name will be placed below. The goal was to make letters look visually interesting rather than clear to read.

Also, I am leaning towards this greenish color on the black below but I also like the Black and White as well. And I was thinking about adding some extra strokes and drop the opacity but I am not sure if that would be too chaotic. 

I would love to know what everyone thinks!

Thank you in advance.

Lauryn

Chameleon Brochure

My project this week is from corporate identity class. I’m content with the style guide and process book, but I feel like the brochure needs more work, so feedback is definitely appreciated. I know that I need to replace some of the images with higher quality versions, but otherwise I’ve hit a bit of a wall.

 

Project Info: Chameleon Art Supplies sells quality creative tools at a reasonable price. The company prides itself on the belief that art is for everyone, no matter the experience or skill level, and encourages artists from all over the country to pick up a paintbrush and do what they love. With competition like Crayola and Prismacolor, Chameleon strives to find the balance between technique and fun. So choose Chameleon for your next artistic undertaking, and let your colors show.

Chameleons are commonly known for their ability to blend in with their surroundings, but the reality is that the creatures primarily use their color-changing abilities for communication purposes, not camouflage.  Art is something that I feel passionate about as a communication tool between humans, so that was a parallel that I focused strongly on during this project. The logo is a simplified chameleon face from the front view, an angle that isn’t often seen in photographs. The logo font is Eccentric STD, which I found strongly reminiscent of a chameleon’s long, stick-like legs. The secondary element is a spread of rounded diamonds. The diamonds come in all of the colors from the company palette EXCEPT for the actual green of the logo, and they are laid out in all different sizes. This design element is a reference to chameleon skin, which is covered in rough bumps of different sizes that enable the chameleon to change their colors. Instead of circular shapes, I used the rounded diamonds in order to connect back to the logo.

Andy Warhol

Hi guys, here is my third piece. It is a cover and one spread and was from advanced typography. It was a few years ago but I do believe the piece was supposed to be about a famous person and to use them as inspiration for the layout and design itself. My piece is about Andy Warhol and his transition from an average person to the person we all knew as an artist and icon.

During the first round of critique it was suggested that instead of having this be a one spread piece and having to create a back cover, I should maybe turn this piece into a poster. I do like the idea since I think I have other strong pieces in my portfolio that are spreads, but I'm not certain on where to start. I really like the layout and I know I will have to change a lot around. I'm having a hard time seeing this piece from another point of view so any suggestions would help!

Evok Process Book

Here is my process book for Evok; For people who didn't see my last post here is a belief summary of what is Evok? 

Evok is a headphone company that wants to create new and innovative ways to experiences music. We want to market ourselves towards teenagers who love music and headphone that reflect their style. Evok want to shows our creatives idea and passion for music to our audience.

I made some minor changes in spacing and added negative space in between the contents .

Evok Headphone

Evok is a headphone company that wants to create new and innovative ways to experiences music.
We want to market ourselves towards teenagers who love music and headphone that reflect their style. Evok want to shows our creatives idea and passion for music to our audience. I recently added negative space between contents and personalize it with a quote from a good friend of mine.

For people who are reviewing this, I hope my passion shows through. Its the first time i put so much effort into a project; it almost felt as if i carved a part of soul into it. It might be cause of song i was listening to when i was making the changes. I was listening to this song i love the orchestra
and a great melody.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Loi4bYzXvAw