Kyle - I wish I had some background info here... who exactly is Sound of Boston (an audio lab?), I know I've seen this before in your App design.. but I guess I'm not clear about what the client does. Based on simply what I see, and assuming the green along the edge of the card is part of your design decisions, I would encourage you incorporate that green in your typography design. It needs some color, in my opinion - just a bit. The obvious choice would be in the logo shape (which is currently black)... but I think another place, a more subtle use of the color, could be the bottom rule of each individual cell in the table... a visual suggestion of "underline."
The image is an interesting crop of a stage, with microphones in foreground and out-of-focus group along back wall. Very textural, not much detail. It's an ok photo - again, I wonder how you might develop it further with inclusion of subtle color definition and/or a composite approach adding other photographic elements to the large expanse of stage in foreground and mid-ground. Subtle would be the operative word... something we might not notice at first. A reflection, or an added texture.
Kyle - I wish I had some background info here... who exactly is Sound of Boston (an audio lab?), I know I've seen this before in your App design.. but I guess I'm not clear about what the client does. Based on simply what I see, and assuming the green along the edge of the card is part of your design decisions, I would encourage you incorporate that green in your typography design. It needs some color, in my opinion - just a bit. The obvious choice would be in the logo shape (which is currently black)... but I think another place, a more subtle use of the color, could be the bottom rule of each individual cell in the table... a visual suggestion of "underline."
ReplyDeleteThe image is an interesting crop of a stage, with microphones in foreground and out-of-focus group along back wall. Very textural, not much detail. It's an ok photo - again, I wonder how you might develop it further with inclusion of subtle color definition and/or a composite approach adding other photographic elements to the large expanse of stage in foreground and mid-ground. Subtle would be the operative word... something we might not notice at first. A reflection, or an added texture.