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We want to market ourselves towards teenagers who love music and headphone that reflect their style. Evok want to shows our creatives idea and passion for music to our audience. I recently added negative space between contents and personalize it with a quote from a good friend of mine.
For people who are reviewing this, I hope my passion shows through. Its the first time i put so much effort into a project; it almost felt as if i carved a part of soul into it. It might be cause of song i was listening to when i was making the changes. I was listening to this song i love the orchestra
and a great melody.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Loi4bYzXvAw
Chris - I count 10 pages. Correct? This # of pages cannot be folded and assembled into a booklet, can it? You need to have a multiple of 4 pages to work - so either 8 or 12 pages is necessary. Have you assembled this?
ReplyDeleteTypos... in both this brochure and the style guide I see typos, grammar issues, and dropped type. Use dynamic spelling, or copy/past this type back into Word and run spell/grammar check... and/or get others involved to read each and every word. Your layouts are so lovely that many people will want to read the pages.
For the style instead of trying to make a booklet i had each page printed individually double sided than acetate cover and black back cover with comb binding. so its 5 pages total. the end will have my interior design with back cover
ReplyDeleteSo, you'll need to think of how you want to present this inside on your portfolio page(s)? Having a bound book might present problems. So... think this through.
DeleteI remember you showing me this project before, Chris! I still think it's great. I really can't think of much you could do to change it.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that bothers me a little bit is that the store interior page doesn't have the same overlayed imagery as the other pages. It seems a little disconnected from the rest of it. I don't know what you could do to fix that, though, without resizing or cropping the illustration in a way that would look awkward. That said, it still looks good the way it is, too. The illustration itself is really impressive and the whole project in general came out really well!