When i look at it I read it until i get to the "o". I did not know that was a "o"...until I realized that it was your last name, and the dot throw me off. Maybe the "co" could be tilted so the "c" is closer to the "i" and the "o" is closer to the "n" but not touching.
Kyle - If color will be added (and I suggest you create a color version, even if you don't use it right now) I would encourage you to keep the color and color contrasts very subtle. Ask yourself how you can make this more "readable" by the inclusion of color? How can you create unity between the letters of your name... .and show us that the dot sitting below the name isn't really part of it... but part of a secondary message? How can you use contrast and unity to pull the parts of this together in 2 different ways (for your name recognition, and then for the secondary business/company reference). It's a great challenge... and some experimentation will be needed. Please know that most people, in my opinion, will see the interesting "o" with it's detail and wonder what it means. It's memorable, and is worth repeating in other ways for other uses possibly. When you become famous... maybe only that shape will be needed for everyone to know it refers to you? (grin) Can color add to this element?
When i look at it I read it until i get to the "o". I did not know that was a "o"...until I realized that it was your last name, and the dot throw me off. Maybe the "co" could be tilted so the "c" is closer to the "i" and the "o" is closer to the "n" but not touching.
ReplyDeleteKyle - If color will be added (and I suggest you create a color version, even if you don't use it right now) I would encourage you to keep the color and color contrasts very subtle. Ask yourself how you can make this more "readable" by the inclusion of color? How can you create unity between the letters of your name... .and show us that the dot sitting below the name isn't really part of it... but part of a secondary message? How can you use contrast and unity to pull the parts of this together in 2 different ways (for your name recognition, and then for the secondary business/company reference). It's a great challenge... and some experimentation will be needed. Please know that most people, in my opinion, will see the interesting "o" with it's detail and wonder what it means. It's memorable, and is worth repeating in other ways for other uses possibly. When you become famous... maybe only that shape will be needed for everyone to know it refers to you? (grin) Can color add to this element?
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